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Translations, and Discussion -- part II


 
чуть шевельнет перья                                     hardly moving      
сонной цапле и стихает                              heron's feathers,  the wind
ветер в камышах                                           calms in the reeds  
 
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тихая река                                                         quiet river
обнимает ногу цапли                                  embracing the heron's leg
живая прохлада                                               a crisp coolness
 
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слушает цапля                                              the heron listens
как трогают кувшинки                                 as lively small fish touch
быстрые рыбки                                                 the water lilies

Marina Darenskaya   marimouse
Russia

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heron                                                             цапля
solitary look                                              одинокий образ
graduate                                                        учёного

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brother blue hair                                         седовласый брат
waiting lover                                             ждёт возлюбленную
at port site                                                   у причала

***
Buddha's river                                                 река Будды
red flower                                                     красный цветок 
and blue heron                                             и голубая цапля

Sakuo Nakamura        sakuo3903
Japan

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stillness ...                                                  неподвижность ...
all the veins below                                        все эти прожилки
the heron's beak                                          под клювом цапли

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stillness ...                                                   спокойствие ...
veins of leaves and fish                          прожилки листьев и рыба   
beneath the heron's beak                            под клювом цапли

Beverley George
Australia

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close to the lotus                                             близко к лотосу
fish --                                                                   рыба --
close to the heron                                           близко к цапле

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flicker under lotus:                                    мерцание под лотосом:
the heron's neck                                             изгибается 
arches                                                           шея цапли

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under water:                                                 под водой:
heron feet,                                                   ноги цапли,
or lotus stalks?                                       или стебли лотоса?

Cris Grama   direaliete
Germany

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ранние сумерки --                                        early dusk --
еще одна звезда                                     one more star by the leg
у ног цапли                                                    of a heron

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качается бабочка                                      a butterfly swaying
на бутоне лотоса –                                     on the soon to open 
вот-вот откроется                                         lotus bud 

***
умолкла косилка –                                       a mower stopped --
в теплом воздухе                                       sweet scent of the grass   
сладкий запах травы                                        in the warm air

Larisa Zvyagina    larisa_zv
Germany

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благоуханье лотосов                                    scent of lotus
замерла на мелководье                        the blue heron motionless
голубая цапля                                             in shallow water

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возникновение мира                                     birth of the world
тянется сквозь воду                              a sinuous lotus stem stretches
гибкий стебель                                             through the water

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время и вечность                                        time and eternity
в прозрачной синеве                                 lotuses blossoming
распускаются лотосы                                  in the clear azure

Viola     v_viola_v
Russia

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конец августа                                              end of August
цапля на лягушек                                   the heron idly responds
отвлекается лениво                                      to frogs call 

трепет кувшинки --                                     a lily trembles --  
падение первой                                       the falling of a first
капли дождя                                                   raindrop

цветенье лотосов                                         lotus blossom      
черты птицы                                            the bird figure dissolves   
растворяются в тумане                                   in the mist

Vyacheslav Kanin      kanin_v
Russia

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вечереет ...                                               growing evening ...
в позе лотоса над водой                       a heron in pose of a lotus
застыла цапля                                          frozen in the water

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летние сумерки --                                      summer dusk --
медленно остывает                             a lotus reflection slowly
отражение лотоса                                       cools down

***
озерный закат --                                          lake sunset --
под листьями лотоса                              darkness thickening
сгущается тьма                                    beneath the lotus leaves

Hana Netyeva   ersh1_1    
Israel

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Heron and lotus                                         цапля и лотос
submerged in the river                              погружённые в реку
of love                                                           любви

Nina Krasteva
Bulgaria
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звуки флейты                                            flute melody
созывает в пляс лотосы                    the blue heron calls lotuses
голубая цапля                                           for a dance

***
звуйки флейты --                                    flute singing --
рисует круги ножками                      the gracious heron spins
грациозная цапля                                   on his legs

***
раскрывшийся лотос --                           opened lotus --
ласкает руку                                         pink tenderness
розовая нежность                                caresses my hand

Anna Begunts   jpit
Ukraine

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цапля над лотосом --                            a heron over lotus
 еще секунду назад                                 a croak in it ...
в нём квааак…                                    just a moment ago! 

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рассвет над прудом                              pond sunrise
цапля замерла                                  the heron stands still
пробуждение будды                         awakening of Buddha

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лотос над темной водой                    lotus on the dark water
ночью маячил                                     last night, the firefly
на том же месте светлячок                      floated there

Polina Sandr   bestia13
Russia

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I ponder my age in this silent reflection -- a heron cries        размышляю о своём возрасте в спокойном отражении -- крик цапли

Robert Mestre

USA

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в утреннем тумане                                     in morning mist
все цапли серы                                       all herons are grey
лишь лотос ...                                              only lotus ...

***
замерев                                                         freezing
прислушалась цапля --                            the heron listens --
распускается лотос                                   lotus blooming

***
старый пруд                                                the old pond
качается лотос                                           lotus swaying
на отражении цапли                                in heron's reflection

Pavel Vorontsov   li_bao
Russia

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Lotus bud --                                                   бутон лотоса --
the old heron still waiting                            старая цапля всё ждёт
for another sunrise                                          новый рассвет
                                 
***
A heron gazing                                           цапля вглядывается
at the place of its heart --                         в самую его сердцевину --
lotus flower                                                    цветок лотоса

***
The heron's step --                                           цапля ступает -- 
a lotus flower looking                               цветок лотоса возвращается
for its old place                                              на старое место

Eduard Tara
Romania

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sky clears up                                                проясняется небо
 
the blue heron's reflection                          отражение голубой цапли
disappearing                                                       исчезает

***
still evening                                                    тихий вечер
a pond skater slides                                   водомерка скользит
over the moon                                                  по луне

***
starry night --                                                  звёздная ночь --
so many lotuses                                           так много лотосов
on the pond                                                       на пруду

Jacek Margolak
Poland

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"turtle,turtle, turtle!"                                  "черепаха, черепаха!"
she also stays in good shape                она всё ещё в хорошей форме 
but the same shape                                     но в том же образе

Zinovy Vayman
Israel

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майский луг                                               May meadow
посреди одуванчиков                           among the dandelions,
сиреневый куст                                          a lilac bush

Radion Hoozin   radion_sveter
Russia
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розово-голубой день ...                                pink-blue day ...
цапля прилетела в пруд --                   a heron comes to the pond
только что                                                     just now 

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заметив лотос,                                             sighting lotus,
цапля притихает                                         the heron freezes
в ожидании...                                              in anticipation

***
среди розовых лотосов                                among pink lotuses
цапля медитирует --                                    the heron meditating --  
полёт к любви...                                             a flight to love ...   

Tsweta Djagarova    omilla
Bulgaria

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(to be continued in Part III  --  see next post)  

 
 
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